2011年10月13日木曜日
Blogging Assignment #5
My topic of essay2 is bioethics and surrogate motherhood system. I chose this topic because I knew the surrogate motherhood system is legal in some countries but in other countries it is not and I was interested in that difference. I heard there is a such difference because the surrogate motherhood system still has problems and those differences affect each family members differently. In my essay, I want to look closely on the problems of the surrogate motherhood system. Ergo, my thesis statement for this essay is 'surrogacy affects family members differently depending on their role in the family.'
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This is a very good topic, but it is not yet in the form of thesis statement. Please look closely at what needs to be included in a well-formed thesis statement.
返信削除I thought the thesis statement might be better if you give specific problems that you are going to write :)
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